Business as Usual Sidetrack Ten

[laurabryannan]

I chose incorrectly in ekaterin24's Who's Gonna Die in the Last Harry Potter Book Contest, and the penalty was a 100 word drab. She prompted, Jin's long, swinging, *gorgeous* hair, and here's what Lmuse came up with. Just a little piece of fluff, totally worksafe. 154 words. I hope everyone has a great weekend!

(BaU Archive)


Business as Usual Sidetrack Ten
wherein Jin hunts for treasure
by Laura Bryannan

They watched the game in relative silence, which was not unusual, but the legal pad balancing on Mugen's knee most certainly was. He pulled it out during the fifth inning and continued to scribble for the remainder of the game, chewing on the end of his pen, so thoughtful Jin was dying of curiosity. The mystery stood for the rest of the night, unfortunately, as it was too nosy to ask about and Mugen clearly wasn't sharing.

Thus, Jin was forced to snoop the following morning, safe in the knowledge his lover wouldn't be up for another few hours. He located the pad underneath the recliner that was Mugen's throne and sank into it, spine and heart melting as, surrounded by fanciful creatures, funny faces and other doodles, he discovered

Black downpour rain silk waterfall
Smells like Rain scent, feels like silken strands
Flowing over around through my soul heart soul
My King's lover's crown

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art by gallo_de_pelea

Comments

[yasashii-kawa.livejournal.com]

cute!!! aw, mugen, that big softy ;)

glad i snuck this in before work 8D

[laurabryannan.livejournal.com]

Yeah, he's just a big softy at heart. ^_~

Glad you liked!

[hidden-gems.livejournal.com]

I think I've just melted as well ♥

[laurabryannan.livejournal.com]

*huggles* A little Friday morning mush.

[r0ck3tsci3ntist.livejournal.com]

Uhm, nice one! Hee hee hee, don't blame him one bit - sometimes I'm tempted to write poetry to Jin's hair as well.

[laurabryannan.livejournal.com]

I know that Mugen and poetry don't go in the same sentence, but I couldn't resist. :D

[3-jane.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwwww! Sometimes I want to give Mugen a big squishy hug, he's so adorkable.

... dammit, woman, now I'm tempted to write you a crack drabble off of this. XD

[laurabryannan.livejournal.com]

Adorkable...hee!

Crack drabble? Did you say crack drabble?

[gallo-de-pelea.livejournal.com]

alksjdlakjdaslkjdlakjsdlakjdlakjd aoh god i'm a puddle

[laurabryannan.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the comment, sweetie! :D

[kfc4deb.livejournal.com]

i like the thought of mugen mulling over poetic words to describe jin's hair. very un-mugen like, but beautiful, silky jin hair can probably make you do crazy things! very sweet, indeed.

[laurabryannan.livejournal.com]

I agree, very un-Mugen like, but I liked the idea too.

[ekaterin24.livejournal.com]

::siiiiiiiiiiiiiigggghhhh::

This is simply ::can't find the words::

Goes to show that Jin's hair would inspire even Mugen to poetry.

I'm sorry it took so long for me to get to this--I wanted to wait till I was home to enjoy it in complete solitude and peace and oh, it was worth the wait.

I'm saving this to memories for that lovely haiku with all the very telling edits...

[laurabryannan.livejournal.com]

You're a sweetieboo! Thanks for your lovely comment. I'm happy you liked it. *huggles*

MMM

[roro237.livejournal.com]

This was so sweet and warm and romantic. mmm

Re: MMM

[laurabryannan.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! :D

[achariya.livejournal.com]

gorgeous fluff. *purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*

exactly the bit of joy i needed just now.

[laurabryannan.livejournal.com]

Well, thank you! ^_^

[sabsquisite.livejournal.com]

Very sweet. I'd never imagine Mugen to be the poetic type, but this is really, really sweet.

[laurabryannan.livejournal.com]

I agree, it's a total contradiction in terms, but what Lmuse wants she gets! :D

[shin-sekai.livejournal.com]

That was really quite amazing. I usually despise poetry...hmm
But all the crossing out is totally Mugen writing poems. Yep, I think the crossing out is what did it for me.
Kudos :)

[laurabryannan.livejournal.com]

I'm far from a poetry fan too, so this surprised the hell out of me, but I'm so glad it rang true for you. *hugs*