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Sorry for the delay in getting this out. School doesn't start till the 5th, so mama be busy.

A fun discussion in someone's LJ about how cute Jin is when he's drunk and voila, my muse found a way into this scene. Not worksafe, 1266 words. I'm pretty happy with this. Hope ya'll will be too. Have a great Labor Day weekend!

[Part 1] [Part 2] [Part 3] [Part 4] [Part 5] [Part 6] [Part 7] [Part 8] [Part 9]
[Part 10] [Part 11] [Part 12] [Part 13] [Part 14] [Part 15] [Part 16] [Part 17]




Business as Usual, part 18
by Laura Bryannan

Jin ignored Ryu-san's calls for two days, and if he and Yuki were spending time together, Yuki was being blessedly discrete about it, so Jin's anger at the situation dissipated. Finally he felt balanced enough to enter the battlefield once again, and picked up.

“Come over and watch the game with me,” Ryu-san proposed.

“The Giants?” Jin asked, incredulously. “You follow baseball?”

“Yeah, I do.”

Jin was interested in spite of himself. He liked baseball and Yuki did not. Yuki was a soccer fan, and it was one of the few topics they insulted each other about. The idea of watching the game with someone else actually sounded like fun. “All right,” Jin decided. “Should I bring anything?”

“Just whatever you want to drink if it ain't beer or sake.”

And so Jin found himself on Ryu-san's couch, munching dinner they'd ordered in, sake in hand. The team hadn't been doing so well in recent years and this game was no different, but Jin enjoyed commiserating with a fellow fan tremendously. His estimation of Ryu-san increased every time they cursed the ump at the same time or agreed on a player error. They spent the entire evening without jousting, and it was good.

By the time the game was over—Giants 3, Golden Eagles 5—Jin was pleasantly soused. Not enough to get sick, not enough to pass out, just nicely sloshed. So when Ryu-san came in from the kitchen and sat next to him, he did not object. He allowed the kiss, enjoying the feel of Ryu-san's arm around his shoulders. Ryu-san's hand was flat on his chest, and Jin felt the heat from it seeping into him, warming his heart and waking him up.

Ryu-san reached under his shirt and began to stroke—along his side, under his arm, thumb grazing a nipple—firmly enough to not tickle much, but enough to cause Jin to shudder involuntarily. He was drifting, allowing the warmth, the sensations and the sake to turn off his mind so his body could come out to play. There was a brief consideration, should I let him? Yes, he decided. He'd fucked Ryu-san first, and that was enough to establish his superiority, plus he was curious what kind of skills the guy had, so he relaxed and slid into dreamspace.

When Ryu-san's mouth left his, there was disappointment, but he gasped in appreciation when it latched onto his left nipple. It felt electrifying, and he was amazed. When Yuki teased him there it always felt irritating, never erotic. He'd grit his teeth, trying to resist the urge to flick the bothersome bug away, and could rarely tolerate the activity for long. Ryu-san was doing...something...and every flick or nip went straight to his cock. The sensations jolted him, causing his body to arch and writhe in ways he was unaware of. But Ryu-san's chuckling broke the spell.

“What's so funny?” Jin mustered the wherewithal to ask.

“Gotta get you drunk more often.”

Jin sighed. “Be quiet, Ryu-san,” he said. “You were doing so well. Don't ruin things by talking.”

Ryu-san growled. “You call me by my family name again, and I'm done.” He removed his hands from Jin's body to emphasize the point.

“All right, um...Mugen,” Jin responded. “Please shut up and continue.”

Mugen rolled his eyes but honored the request, kissing him again, teasing the roof of his mouth with the steel in his tongue. Jin would capture it every so often, closing his teeth so the barbell could not escape, and tickle the tip of it with his own while it's owner squeaked. The kissing drugged Jin, as it always did, the sake only enhancing the spell. The fiery mouth began at his throat, wandered down his arm, biting inner elbow and then moving to attack a nipple. It dipped into his navel and he squirmed. Oh please, lower, lower.... The heated dream returned, and he reveled in the sensations.

Mugen was in mid-kiss when he gathered Jin up and lifted him off the couch, so he had little ability to protest. A disturbing image of a bride being carried over the threshold entered Jin's mind, but he tried to ignore it. Mugen lay him on his bed and renewed his ministrations—kissing, laving, biting, sucking—and the distracting thoughts disappeared immediately.

At some point Jin realized his jeans were off. When did that happen? The ardent mouth was upon him again, and all his questions about what Mugen could do with the steel in his tongue were answered. Gods, the guy was talented...and blessedly thorough. Jin felt no urgency, no need to cum. In fact, he never wanted it to stop.

Warmth took him in, set his spine on fire, made him feel so alive, so aroused, it was like basking in a benevolent sun. He felt welcomed, cared for, tended in the most delicious way. And when that warmth wandered lower, where Yuki had never ventured, he was incredulous but grateful. Oh gods yes! It was as good as he'd always fantasized it would be. He was teased, opened, entered. It was heavenly. Don't stop, don't stop. Please don't stop. It didn't, not for a long time. His awareness was focused on every caress and every invasion, savoring the rapture.

When the warmth left him he ached for its return, but only for a moment. There was more tickling and then he was entered again, deeper this time, scratching an itch he hadn't known existed. Finger. Yes. More. Another. His cock was swallowed and his mind went white. It was almost enough to force the sting of the stretching from his awareness. But the fingers inside him knew how to cajole and soothe, and he was soon thrusting himself upon them shamelessly, unaware of his dance and how much Mugen was appreciating it.

Eventually there was a problem. Discomfort was poking at his consciousness, waking him from his intoxicating reverie, and he whimpered and thrashed his head in protest. It's him. Don't know if I can...he's so thick. Mugen's mouth took his again, entrancing him, ravishing him, and he relaxed once more.

“Shhh, easy,” Mugen whispered against his lips, "we're almost there, I can feel it. Let me try something, K?” Jin murmured an assent, and felt himself gathered into those strong arms again. Mugen knelt up, hugging him to his chest, holding him poised over the weapon only partially impaling him. And then he let go. Gravity did its work and Jin slid downward with a scream, although it was more in surprise than pain. Taken to the hilt, the burn was unmistakable, but so was the pleasure.

It was overwhelming enough that he opened his eyes and blinked in surprise to discover Mugen. That's right. It's him. He's doing this to me. But there was lust and appreciation reflected in the alluring face, so he smiled instead of bristled, and sought a kiss.

Mugen lay him down, began to move and he was lost again. So full, so complete, so utterly satisfying. The rhythm of life...like the sea, like breathing. Accepting and releasing, allowing the emptiness only because it meant the filling, again and again. The sensations washed over and through, surrounding him in a fierce heat that finally exploded, consumed and left him essentially unconscious.

There was a blanket. A warm body snuggling behind, enveloping arms into which he blissfully settled.

“You're fucking amazing, you know that?” his lover whispered. Jin smiled and slept.

to be continued



art by [livejournal.com profile] gallo_de_pelea

Date: 2006-09-02 01:42 pm (UTC)
ext_3548: (SamIrresistable)
From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
Gih.
Just...
GUH.
::sound of Shay's body thudding on the floor::

Date: 2006-09-02 01:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
*picks up and pets* You're a sweetie! So glad you liked it.

Date: 2006-09-02 02:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 3-jane.livejournal.com
'“You were doing so well. Don't ruin things by talking.”' *squee!* Like I didn't already love Jin with the burning passion of a thousand fiery suns, but I love Jin.

*squee!*

Love how you worked baseball in there too! These little flashes of canon are just delicious. Mm!

Date: 2006-09-02 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
*hugglesmooch* You know, there actually is a team in the Japanese baseball league, the Chiba Lotte Marines, manned by US servicemen...so Baseball Blues! I really wanted to work in a reference to it, but couldn't find a way.

Date: 2006-09-02 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] llamachan.livejournal.com
...*is -dead-* Gaaaah...

And if that's what happens, Jin really does have to get drunk more often!

Date: 2006-09-02 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
Tee hee. I most certainly agree. Methinks Mugen is going to be pouring sake down his throat from now on. ^_^

Date: 2006-09-02 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kimper.livejournal.com
*fans self*

Oh My Gosh Hun! I think this is my favorite au scene thus far. Just....guh *mind ish mush*

That was definitely fantabulous! *huggles* Excellent job my dear, totally excellent. *more huggles* :)

Date: 2006-09-02 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. I think this is one of my favs too! *glompsmush*

Date: 2006-09-02 04:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hidden-gems.livejournal.com
*joins Shay on the floor*

Date: 2006-09-02 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
Don't catch cold down there, OK? *smooch*

Date: 2006-09-02 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] farstrider.livejournal.com
What a smart muse you have. . .I was wondering how Mugen was going to get Jin into anything resembling a sexual place. . .One slightly sloshed Jin coming up. ^__^ I love the whole "Be quiet, Ryu-san," exchange. . . that's soooo Jin. . .


Love it. . .

~FS

Date: 2006-09-02 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
*giggle* Thank goodness for silly flist discussions about cartoon men! I knew what I wanted to do here, just couldn't get there until...what if Jin gets drunk and doesn't pass out?

Date: 2006-09-02 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gallo-de-pelea.livejournal.com
Guh.

Every day should begin with Grape-Nuts and porn.

Date: 2006-09-02 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
I completely agree! ^_^

Date: 2006-09-02 05:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artificalapple.livejournal.com
... champloo porn and great america all wrapped in one on the labor day weekend.

this is life.

Date: 2006-09-02 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
So glad to contribute to a happy Labor Day weekend!

Date: 2006-09-02 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pickymonkey.livejournal.com
soo hawt!!
love the baseball and the sake and all the heat and the melting....
like sitting in a room full of lava!

Date: 2006-09-02 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
Lava love...tee hee. Good one! Thanks for your comment.

Date: 2006-09-02 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] walerian.livejournal.com
*brains go gloop* This really brightened my dreary, sucky day! Thank you!!!

Date: 2006-09-02 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
You're very welcome. I'm glad to help.

Date: 2006-09-03 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vejiicakes.livejournal.com
*opens mouth*

*closes it*

*opens again*

I...

*brain liquefies and leaks out ears*

Guuuuuuuh.

I don't know how I've missed this series so far, but like.. I have, but it's here, and I've found it, and it's .. holy hell, so awesome and hot and I can't breathe. *gurgles* (Heee~! We'll see if Mugen ever sets up a meeting with Jin without a couple six packs of beer onhand again XD)

Date: 2006-09-03 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
*blush* Well you sure know how to make a gal's night! I'm having so much fun with this AU, I'm glad you are too.

Methinks Mugen may indeed try the strategy again, however we all know Jin's typical reaction to alcohol, so I'm not sure whether it would work the same way next time. ^_~

Date: 2006-09-03 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elixirella.livejournal.com
::thundrous applause!::

I'm sending a bottle of Glenlivet straight to Jin's door, and another one to you for providing us with such delicious work!!
What a fantastic pair.
You're the best, Laura!

Date: 2006-09-03 01:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
What a sweetiepie you are! This part was sweet to think about and fun to write, so I'm very happy folks are enjoying it.

Date: 2006-09-03 01:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kfc4deb.livejournal.com
once again, amazing job! this was very hot, but very, i guess sweet, too. i think jin should get drunk more, as well. i dunno, just the passion that was present this time around made for a really, really good read. i'm loving this more and more every chapter! i can only wonder what will happen next. great job.

Date: 2006-09-03 01:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
I see this part as a kind of turning of the tides between them. An opening for more than their continual battling. We shall see. But thank you so much for your comment. This part kind of swept me away too.

Date: 2006-09-03 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asario.livejournal.com
ooh...shiver. I love these drabbles so much! I mean, everything, the characterization, the imagery, the smuttish type scenes, I just love it! I can't wait for your next part!

Date: 2006-09-03 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. Your comment makes me very happy. *hugs*

Date: 2006-09-03 02:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neldluva.livejournal.com
Yeeeeeeeow, that was HOT. Laura ... dang. *gapes fishlike*

Though I do worry about the morning after. I have a bad feeling about the morning after. Lovely work, though! I'm glad Jin isn't quite as weird about this relationship as he was.

Date: 2006-09-03 04:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
You have good instincts, my dear! Yes, the morning after...methinks Mugen will find a way to eff up. ^_^

Date: 2006-09-03 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neldluva.livejournal.com
Mugen ALWAYS finds a way to f*** up. And not in the good way. So I worry. Hopefully it won't be too painful?

Date: 2006-09-03 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
Nah, not painful. But it will serve many purposes. *nods sagely*

Date: 2006-09-03 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabsquisite.livejournal.com
Jin is so pliant when he's drunk. I enjoyed the contrast in, er, styles to the last chapter. Mugen's so--almost sweet, but I think he's melting Jin, slowly but surely. And I second the comment about the morning after. Looking forward to more.

Date: 2006-09-03 08:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
Yes, yes, quite a contrast! I'm glad that was apparent. The morning after should be fun. Working on it now. Thanks so much for your comment!

Date: 2006-09-05 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abandonreality.livejournal.com
HADHFJKDKAJKJDSK......buh.
*is sooo glad she had time to get caught up today*
*is puddle of goo*

Date: 2006-09-05 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
*kissies* I'm so glad you liked it. This one was fun to write.

Date: 2006-09-15 09:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akari-hayashi.livejournal.com
*faints* That is just awesome! I love, love, love it. Some sweet drunk smex and uke!Jin! Gahhh.

Date: 2006-09-15 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
This is one of my favorite bits so far. Glad you like too!

Date: 2006-10-26 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageisuke.livejournal.com
::crumples to floor:: blood spurts out of nose:: unconcious::

Date: 2006-10-26 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
This was one of my fav bits of this entire story!
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